~Daydream~

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~Daydream~

Postby karyzma » Wed Oct 22, 2003 5:52 pm

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Postby Flameforge » Wed Oct 22, 2003 6:48 pm

I really like this too, and that picture goes so perfectly.
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Postby Cogs » Wed Oct 22, 2003 8:07 pm

That just left me breathless..........
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Postby Addice » Thu Oct 23, 2003 7:48 pm

simply amazing. it was drawn out very well and you could feel the emotions in the poem as though they were your own. though sadness was the a major theme in this it had underlying themes of hope and a sort of "loyalty"to ones feelings and heart which does not seem to be easily dismissive. as always your writings are great and inspirational. makes me want to pick up a pen and start to write again.
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Postby Cogs » Fri Oct 24, 2003 2:37 am

...and the music to underline its mood.......again, amazing.....
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