by Addice » Thu Oct 23, 2003 7:48 pm
simply amazing. it was drawn out very well and you could feel the emotions in the poem as though they were your own. though sadness was the a major theme in this it had underlying themes of hope and a sort of "loyalty"to ones feelings and heart which does not seem to be easily dismissive. as always your writings are great and inspirational. makes me want to pick up a pen and start to write again.
Gaara: I finally understand... I am alone! I will not believe anyone anymore.... I will not love... I'm on my own... haha... thats right... I'm all alone.